Love
This Photo essay portrays two people who at first sight fall in love. With each picture, we can see their feelings get stronger for each other. In the first photograph they are on opposite sides of the couch, however they come closer together with each progressing slide. This demonstrates their sudden attraction for each other as expressed by the final slide. In the final slide, their love is finally embraced when they make contact with each other. Therefore, this is a story about love at first sight.
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good story. simple. works in order.
suggestions:
good framing initially, but it wears out. what if as they get more intimate, the camera gets closer to them, so that as they get more intimate, we become part of their intimate space with them.
or drastic changes in the proximity and angles of the camera so that we get the details. the eyes, the legs over each other, where their hands are, smiles, a couple point of view shots from each character. it might make it more dynamic.
kylos - September 16, 2009 at 6:23 pm |
I like the continuity of this photo essay. Every picture gradually leads to the next, and there appears to be an increasing degree of intimacy between the couple with each picture, although after the 5th picture it seems to go backwards a little. The fact that the pictures flow with an effective trend helps the viewer to make sense of the story. I like the parallel framing, but maybe it would be more interesting if you zoomed in more with each picture.
Good Job.
jvmusumeci - November 30, 2009 at 4:55 pm |